Carrie Bartsch
Locals
I work the Watertower Mall parking ramp, Michigan Avenue. It’s my territory
and I see all kinds: cell phone divas, business guys who meet in the food court
for a quick potato, Northern debutantes out for a new gown. I’m hip, I roll
with the styles. People stop and talk to me, not because I’m a lonely ticket
taker, but because I’m one of those guys that reminds everyone of someone
else.
I used to wear my blue one-piece mechanic suit, but that was all for show,
and now I stick to oxfords and grey slacks, a Jerry Garcia tie if the mood hits
me.
For kicks, I flirt with Rani, the lane two girl. She works the ticket booth
to the left of me. If I quit my job, she’d get lane one, but I’m not about
to start over again. I’ve brought class to this place. And that goes for Rani,
too. She says her parents live in Calcutta and want her back, but she refuses.
"And leave this place?" she says. I’ve tried to flirt with her,
throw ink pens at her window, but one afternoon she laid it down straight.
"We’d have ugly kids, Laszlo, you know it."
That crushed me, I couldn’t look at her for at least an hour, and even
though Rani is exotic, she isn’t a Lladro. When I was ten years old, my father
bought my mother a Lladro for her birthday, the one she had been admiring on the
Magnificent Mile. She was making her birthday cake when he came home. "I
hope you didn’t," she said, holding a spoonful of vanilla frosting. He
opened the box, took out the sculpture and put it on the kitchen table. Mother
dropped the spoon onto the wood floor and kissed him on the mouth.
My father wouldn’t let me touch it, like it had a halo around it. It was a
white porcelain woman laying down on her back in a loose nightgown and she held
a tiny alabaster baby above her chest. Even though the sculpture was bare,
unpainted, I imagined her hair a chestnut brown, her eyes green, and her arms
reaching out not to the baby, but to me.
She became the focus of my fantasies and instead of sitting in a dark room
looking at nudie mags, I would set her on my pillow and stare at her for hours.
After a few months, Mother lost interest in the Lladro and gave it to me. She
was a softy because I was her only kid.
I tried to sketch pictures of the woman, first without the baby, then without
the nightgown. When I touched her, it left a grease mark on her body and when I
didn’t, she gathered dust.
Rani asked me last week why I’m single, and I told her: "There’s a
woman out there and she going to buy a new nightgown, maybe at Saks Fifth Avenue
and God help it, she’ll come in this ramp and I’ll be here waiting." I
had been saving this line for years.
Today is Sunday, the day I usually buy a new pair of socks at the mall. When
I am locking up my booth, Rani comes out of hers.
"Hey, go back," I say to her. "Only one person at a
time."
Her eyes glow in the dim ramp. "Rani, have you put on some weight? I
think you look better this way."
She glares at me, then pulls a pack of cigarettes from her bucket purse.
"Need one?" she said.
I notice the parking lot is fairly empty for a Sunday afternoon, probably
because they’re all using the cheap outdoor lot. My bosses kid likes to
skateboard on the B floor, but he didn’t come today and it is quiet, except
for the occasional slam of the car door, voom, and then the click clack click
clack.
"Let me go with you. I can call in a replacement," she says. She
flicks her blue jean lighter and sucks on the Camel. "So do you think you’d
recognize your dream lady if you saw her?"
She exhales and blows the smoke into the humid air. "Because I don’t
have a dream guy, Laz. But if I did, I’d sure as hell know him if he drove
by."
I back out of her way as she loads up with more smoke. "All right, but
don’t let this be a habit," I say. When I get into my booth, I open the
window and stick out my head. "Do you want tomorrow off, too?" I say
to Rani.
She puts the cigarette in her mouth and jumps up and down.
I pick up the phone and watch Rani as I dial. Before I get Ruthie, our
back-up girl, on the line, Rani makes an air kiss and blows it my way. I put my
hand over the phone. "Want to give me a real one?"
She smiles, her teeth almost iridescent.
"Ruthie, it’s an emergency . . . " and I speak the yadda yadda
bullshit she’s used to when I want her to cover. After listening to her talk
about her new house and her pet Spaniel who bit the Welcome Wagon lady, I say,
"Ruthie, you’re only twenty eight, and, for God’s sake, I’ll take you
out to lunch tomorrow. No, make it next week." I hang up and look at Rani,
who has put out her cigarette.
She comes to the window, sticks in her head and smiles. This is the closest I
have been to her. I put down the phone and am captivated by the color of her
gums. I want to touch them, make a dent in them with my fingernails. She holds
out her hands, palm up. I place mine on top.
"Well," I say and look at the wall clock, "she’ll be here in
ten minutes."
Rani pulls her hand from under mine and we play the hand tower game, stacking
and pulling away our hands until we are slapping each other.
"Thumb war," she says.
The ramp light shines on her bare shoulders. "Maybe you’d like to wear
my coat. It’s getting drafty." I take a peek at her skin again and close
my eyes.
"I’ll show you that game some other time," she says.
A white Oldsmobile stationwagon pulls into the ramp and honks three times.
The horn echoes like a Lincoln zoo seal and I cover my ears. Ruthie cranks down
her window and gives me the desperate smile, making the mole above her lip rise
and tilt. "I really could use something in return," she says. She
rolls up the window and drives around the corner to park.
Rani runs to her booth and grabs her jacket while I shut my window and total
the ticket sales. I lock the door and walk over lane two and sit on the curb.
The November wind snakes through the ramp entrance and catches my bare neck.
Ruthie walks up to me with her mouth open. "And I thought I was just
covering for you." She points to Rani, who is zipping up her coat.
I hand Ruthie a twenty from my back pocket. "Consider us even," I
say. "Page me if you have any problems."
Rani takes off her watch and waves it in the air. "We’ve got to hurry,
Laszlo. They’re having the live mannequins in the Macy’s window. I’ve
always wanted to see them."
I put my hands on top of her shoulders and look into her eyes. "I can’t
imagine something more important, I really can’t."
We walk to the glass elevator and take it to the top floor. I hold onto the
chrome railing as we soar over crowds of children, white Christmas lights, and a
fifty-foot blow-up santa. When we reach the top, the elevator opens to blaring
Muzak and screaming kids. I peek my head out of the elevator and am accosted by
smells of nacho cheese and flavored coffee. "I don’t know," I say
and stay in my corner. "Ruthie’s kind of a fuck-up. Maybe I should check
on her."
Rani pries my fingers from the railing and pulls me out of the elevator. The
door shuts on my heel and leaves a shallow knick. "Remind me to stop at the
shoe repair place," I say.
We are walking at Rani’s pace against the flow of traffic. She has me by
the shirt sleeve and is dragging me along. Her arm is sleek and toned. Under the
mall lights, she could pass for twenty.
"Ran, how old are you?" I say, almost tripping over my wingtips.
She gives me the finger with the other hand and yanks me along harder. We
pass the pay phones and I break from Rani’s grasp. A woman squats on the floor
crying, the phone cable dangling above her. Her eyes are swollen and she is
scratching at her face.
I pull a hanky out of my pocket and walk toward her. Rani pulls me back by
the belt loop. "What do you know about women?" she says.
She lets go of me and we start tunneling through the crowd again. When we get
to Macy’s, she runs up ahead and disappears into the mass. In a few minutes,
she emerges with a brochure. "Look," she says and opens up the beige
pamphlet. "They brought them all the way from Amsterdam. Imported."
I take the brochure from her and close it. "You could be a model."
A man’s voice booms over the Macy’s loudspeaker. "Modeling our
winter Donna Karan line, we bring the Netherlands to you." His voice fades
and we wait in silence. I scuttle to find a crack in the crowd.
"Do you have to take classes for this?" I say to Rani.
She smiles and then hits me in the stomach. "Be quiet, would you. No one
else is talking."
The red velvet curtain rises, exposing a sliver of the display window. People
around us start fighting to see an inch of a beautiful model, maybe a slip of
fabric. A bearded guy with a baseball cap leans over and shouts into my ear.
"A fucking mime from New Orleans would suffice, don’t you think?" he
says.
Before he can introduce himself, I take Rani’s hand and lead her toward the
front of the crowd.
She looks at me and squeezes my hand. "I didn’t know you got excited
about this kind of thing, Laz. I’m impressed."
I take a deep breath and stare at the curtain, which has lifted two inches in
the last minute. My heart beats faster as it opens and then I see it: the foot.
It is wearing a black leather pump. Then come the ankle and the leg.
Rani digs in her purse and pulls out a silver lipstick tube. "They only
show one model at a time," she says. While the velvet rises, she fiddles
with the cap.
A solid black cocktail dress unveils itself in front of us, followed by the
model’s face. Her arms are positioned so she looks like she is holding an
invisible beach ball.
"Would you look at that?" I say to Rani.
"Are people born like that?" she says, and lets go of my hand.
The Macy’s crowd is dead silent as if pulled in by some immortal force. We
watch the woman and her exquisite long fingers; we wait for her to bend, move
her arms, blink.
After twenty minutes, the crowd thins and it is just us, the mime guy, and a
few seniors in wheelchairs. Rani and I are still standing, our eyes on the woman’s
face.
The mime guy walks in front of us and waves his hands in our faces. When we
don’t respond, he says, "Fuck it," and takes off.
I leave Rani and go closer to the window. Not a visible blemish on the woman’s
body and I imagine the rest of her as flawless. I kiss my hand and put it on the
window. Something about the model makes me want to kiss the glass itself. When I
do this, she looks straight at me and blinks.
Rani has lost interest and is sitting on a bench near the espresso bar. I put
both my hands to the window and kiss it again. Before I can catch the model’s
expression, a security guard comes from behind and pulls me off the window.
"You can look, buddy, but don’t touch the glass," he says.
I stay back an inch from the window and wait for her to blink again. Moments
later, a chime sounds from the loudspeaker. She opens her eyes wide and yawns.
While the curtain lowers, I see her bend down and slip off her shoes.
The security guard is drinking coffee with Rani on the bench. I walk in back
of them and when I’m clear, I run into Macy’s. As I approach the information
desk, a older black woman with tortoise-shell glasses gets off the phone. She
motions for me to come.
"Can you tell me how long those models are staying in the United
States?" I say.
She takes off her glasses and lays them on the table. "How long you want
them to stay?" she says and smiles.
"Well, it’s just . . ."
"Hold on a second," she says and grabs the ringing line. She sets
down the phone and shakes her head. "Wrong number . . .but let me tell you
something." She leans close to me and bites her bottom lip. "What’s
it to you?"
I look at her and then reach for my wallet.
"The Hilton," she says and puts on her glasses. "Hyde Park, I
think."
I slip her a ten and head out the Macy’s entrance to find Rani laying on
the bench. She’s massaging her temples and staring at the ceiling.
"They have more models in twenty minutes, if you want to wait," she
says to me.
I move her legs and sit down.
"When you went into the store, I saw her come out the employee entrance.
She was holding hands with a woman who weighed about eighty pounds." Rani
sits up and stretches her arms. "If you look at her close-up, she’s not
all that."
A santa’s elf midget comes up the central escalator and heads for the
coffee stand. His forehead sweats under his green felt hat as he orders latte.
Rani puts her hand on my knee. "She wasn’t wearing makeup and she had
freckles. The big splotchy kind that almost connect."
The dwarf walks past us, his boots jingling with sewed-on bells. He takes a
sip of the latte and he burns his tongue. "Mother fucking . . ." he
says, then stops when he sees a kid and his mother coming toward him.
"I’m sorry, what?" I say to Rani.
"It’s like they’re trying to trick us when they wear makeup. Listen,
are you hungry? I know of a Greek place off of Lake Shore."
I pull her up off the bench. "You paying?"
She ignores me as we walk toward the elevator. When we get in, she turns
around. "What kind of name is Laszlo? Does it mean anything?" She
pushes the first floor button and the doors close.
We take the train and get off near the University of Chicago. "How far a
walk is this?" I say.
She picks up the pace. "Getting old on me? No, it’s only a mile or so.
I can almost taste the baklava."
Half an hour later, we get to the restaurant. It’s a corner joint with
pastel gyros painted on the windows. When we walk in the doors, we are greeted
by a tall dark Latino wearing a madras shirt. "Hola," he says,
"Smoking or non?"
Rani takes out her cigarettes and flashes them in his face. The maitre de
motions to our waiter, who then ushers us to a table. We sit down and peruse the
menus.
The waiter pulls out an order pad. "Can I get you some drinks?" he
says.
I look at Rani. "Dos Equis, tequila poppers?" I say. "Or maybe
we should start out with quesadillas and skip the drinks."
Rani peers over her placemat menu and then clears her throat. "We would
like two gyros platters, extra sauce, and two Bud Lights."
He takes the order and heads into the kitchen.
We sit at the table reading our zodiac signs on the menus. "It says here
I’m horny when it comes to Capricorns," I say.
She takes my menu, crumples it up and throws it on the floor. "Even if
you did find her in the Hilton lobby, do you think she’d be interested in you?
I mean, come on. You’re twenty years older than her and worse than that, you’re
a ramp attendant. She’s probably got Fabio with her right now. He’s got his
shirt off and he’s pulling off her nylons with his teeth."
I look down at my hands, the coal gray hair over the knuckles. Our waiter
comes by with the drinks and sets them on bright orange coasters. "Did the
security guy tell you anything else?" I say to Rani.
We take two sips and the waiter comes by again. He sets down two red plastic
baskets, our dinner. "Will that be all?" he says.
Rani and I look at each other and shake our heads. I lay my credit card on
the table as he walks away and then I take a french fry from her basket.
"What will it take for you to tell me her room number?"
She opens the plastic cup and pours the cucumber dressing over her gyro.
"She’s staying on the tenth floor."
I grab the waiter as he passes by. "Check, please." He takes my
credit card and disappears. I turn to Rani. "The curiosity is eating you,
too, isn’t it?"
We eat our food in silence, stopping every now and then to pass the salt or
pepper.
I notice a greasy man with pork-chop sideburns staring at Rani from the booth
across the way. He’s chewing on a toothpick and watching her as she puts a
french fry in her mouth. I look around and get the feeling that every slimy guy
in Cristoph’s has put down his gyro to watch Rani lay the fry on her tongue
before it rolls between her teeth and melts into her throat.
The waiter comes back and hands me my Visa. I’m done eating, but he takes
Rani’s food before she can finish dipping her french fry in the dressing. As
he walks away, she throws the fry at him and just misses his neck.
"Get me out of here before I do something," she says.
We stand up and move out of the restaurant. When we get to the cashier, I
dump off the credit card copy and grab a handful of mint patties.
Rani follows me to the street and before I can unwrap a mint, she’s got a
taxi pulling up next to us. She opens the front passenger door, gets in and
starts talking with the driver in Hindi. "Hurry, get in the back," she
says to me and then slams her door.
I reach to get inside and feel a sharp pain in my knees. The cabby leans back
and gives me the "close the door, you wasted old man" look. He adjusts
his turban over his young face. He eyes Rani, then he gives me "the
look" again. "Three dollars for the first mile," he says.
It’s a short ride, expensive, but Rani takes the fare, pays for it with her
laundry quarters. The guy wants to show us the city, but we tell him forget it,
we’re from around here. He speaks to Rani in Hindi again and she shakes her
head. He holds onto her arm and then she says something very fast, backs out of
the car, and slams the door.
I get out after her and look up at the hotel sign. I knock on the cabby’s
window until he rolls it down. "This is the Ramada," I say. "Are
you blind?"
He stares at the steering wheel, silent. Then he steps on the gas and speeds
away toward Lake Shore Drive.
"Fine," I say. I adjust the fanny pack around my waist and join
Rani on the curb.
"Did you think he was handsome?" I say to her.
"Yeah," she says, "and he spoke my language. That makes us a
pair."
I look up at the sign. "The Ramada. Can you believe it?"
A guy my age clad in brown polyester pants, a stained white postman shirt,
and tennis shoes, comes out of the glass doors and holds out his arm to Rani.
"May I help you with your luggage?" he says.
She takes his arm and follows him inside. I walk with them to the front desk,
where he takes his leave to smoke a cigarette.
Rani turns around, her eyes wide open, her pupils like queen olives. She puts
her hands together and holds them to her chest. "Let’s stay here. I’ve
never stayed in a fancy hotel. What do you think?"
She kisses me on the cheek before I can answer and then puts her purse on the
counter. "We would like a room with two single beds," she says to the
slicked back blonde. "Put us on the tenth floor."
The woman rolls her eyes and starts typing. I stand next to Rani and watch
the blonde’s claw-nails tap the keys. I leave the two women and walk toward
the lavender couch. The bellhop sits down across from me. "Hey man," I
say to him, "Where’s the Hilton?"
He takes a drag and exhales, his lips a perfect O. "Ain’t no Hilton in
Hyde Park. This is it, baby. You want something pretty, you go downtown."
I push myself up from the couch and he closes his eyes to sleep, cigarette
still in hand. The elevator doors open in back of us and he bolts to his feet
and straightens his back.
A tall woman in baggy gray sweats walks out and zips up her jacket. It’s
her. She’s got her hair stuffed into a Bulls cap, loose tendrils framing her
oval face. I glance over at Rani, who seems to be in deep conversation with the
front desk lady.
The bellhop makes a thumbs down sign as I walk toward the woman. He mouths
the words "Careful, she bites." Besides Rani and the other two, the
model and I are the only ones in the room. I straighten my collar and walk
toward her. The closer I get, the sicker I feel. I try to focus on her face, her
body, but my dizziness takes hold and all I see is a tall blur with legs. When I’m
a few feet away, my knees lock.
She looks down at me and raises her perfectly tweezed eyebrow. "Excuse
me," she says and pushes to get past me.
I grab her upper arm and squeeze hard. "We need to have dinner
together," I say.
She breaks free. "Are you another one of those damn mall freaks?"
she says. "God, if I could get a dollar for every one of you, I could stay
at the Ritz."
"OK then," I say. "If you’re from Amsterdam, why the Jersey
accent?"
She leans down to tighten her shoe laces and stands up straight, a virtual
giant. "I’d like you to try and pose under hot lights day after day and
have to stare at slobbering perverts who don’t care a damn what your name
is." She flips her ponytail and signals the bellhop.
He puts out his cigarette and rushes to her side. As they head for the door,
she turns around. "Dinner at Le Bistro tomorrow night at eight o’clock."
She smiles at me and the bellhop escorts her outside to a waiting taxi.
Rani’s walking toward me with the room key in her hand. "I was
watching," she says and starts rubbing my back. "Just don’t get your
hopes up."
I wriggle away from her. "Let’s go watch cable and relax."
She continues to touch my back as we walk up the stairs.
We get to the tenth floor and she opens the door. Stained gold carpet with
mahogany fleur de lis decorates the one-lightbulb hallway.
"Last door on the left," Rani says, and leads me down the buckled
carpet.
She fumbles with the key and pushes open the door. I peer into the room. A
brightness hits me. The place is a Victorian dream, a Saks Fifth showcase.
Matted ivory drapes dust the white carpet. A pilled bedspread covers each single
sleigh-bed frame, and on the right wall hangs a large brass-framed mirror.
Rani runs to the bed closest to the TV. She stretches out on her back and
puts a pillow under her head. She looks at me out the corner of her eye.
"If I was a Lladro, I’d want a room like this."
I walk to the bed and sit down next to her. I arrange her black hair it so it
fans over the white bedspread.
She sits up and takes off her shirt. "Can you help me with this?"
she says. Once her bra is off, she tries to unbutton my oxford.
I move away from her. I imagine her taking off my shirt and finding the
random patches of body hair.
She stands up and unzips her pants, then lets them fall to the floor.
"Suit yourself," she says.
I lay back on the bed, my body still sore from walking. I reach for the
remote control and turn on the TV. The Red Sox game fills the room. Rani has now
made herself naked, her hair surrounding her body like a shawl. She walks in
front of the TV and stops.
"Your blocking the game," I say. I try not to get aroused, but I
find myself staring at her legs, the long keloid scar that wormholes from her
left knee to the inside of her thigh.
She turns around so I am now looking at her backside. I notice where the scar
stops and I close my eyes.
"Is this better?" she says.
I run my fingers through my hair and flip off the remote. "Why don’t
we fall asleep together," I say.
She looks down at her body and then covers her breasts with her hands.
"Well, are you coming?" I say. I pull back the covers and make room
for her small body.
She sighs and turns off the TV, then all the lights, and after she’s
brushed her teeth, she slips under the covers. Before I can say anything to her,
she’s got her eyes closed.
I listen to her breathing and stare out the window. Yellow neon lights
spelling out "Nick’s Hair Tonic" illuminate half the room, the empty
bed side. Every few seconds they blink off and keep me suspended until they
flicker on again in full brightness.
I look over at Rani and touch her cheek. "Lie still," I whisper,
and I pull the white bedspread over her face. Her breathing gets faster and I
rub her stomach until she calms.
She tries to lift up her head but I put my hand on her blanketed forehead.
"This will help you relax," I say. I smooth my hands over her ivory
draped body and tuck and fit each curve.
She stirs under the blanket. "This isn’t turning me on," she
says.
"Be patient, I’m almost finished." I grab my fanny pack from the
bedside table and pull out a Swiss Army knife.
"What are you doing?" she says.
I flip out the buck knife and polish it on my pillow case. "Don’t
move," I say to her. Her body freezes and I bring the knife to her
shoulder. I lift up the fabric and puncture a small hole. Next, I take out the
mini scissors.
"Really, don’t hurt me," she says.
I cut a grapefruit size hole in the bedspread and then repeat the motion over
her other shoulder.
"We’re doing fine," I say and ease her arms out of the holes. I
position them above her chest. When I let go of them, they fall limp to her
sides. "Please. You’re almost finished," I say.
She lays still. I try her arms again, but she will not cooperate.
"That’s it," Rani says. She sits up and throws off the blanket.
"This is not going to work." Beads of sweat line her forehead and
upper lip. "Laszlo, what’s the matter with you?"
My heartbeat goes manic. I stare at her, unable to speak.
"Forget it," she says and takes me into her arms. She puts my head
on her chest. I nestle into her warm skin and listen to her breathing develop
into a gentle snore.
While she sleeps, I lay back and watch the neon lights, how they will keep on
blinking, day and night. |